Revise

 Today we started off by revising our essay a little bit and highlighting the thesis in the introduction and conclusion. We also highlighted any suffocated words. After we did that we got a paper to read over someone's paper and make notes on it. My partner didn't do any revisions for me so I re-read my paper and I just did another teacher's work for the rest of the class. revisement 

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